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DAVID M. KATZ's avatar

"Riverside Park across the street: the trees

are bare, and now the sun is going down,

black against the sky. The pewter river

has begun to freeze. It looks like snow."

-- A perfectly visually stanza, clear and cold. I should know. I live a block from Riverside Park.

Ken Gordon's avatar

Location, location, location, eh?

Ken Gordon's avatar

So much empathy and attention in this: "When she wakes up / one cheek will be moist, herringboned, and red."

DAVID M. KATZ's avatar

Exactly! But my comment should read "perfectly visualized". My bad.

Ken Gordon's avatar

To typo is human!

Ken Gordon's avatar

Because Moses Hadas appears in the first stanza, I must link to his daughter's fine essay about him here in the comments: https://magazine.columbia.edu/article/many-lives-moses-hadas