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Melanie Bettinelli's avatar

I like the way "deckle-edged opium / poppy" zooms in on the keenly-observed edge of the petals. I just learned the term "deckle-edged" last year and it's a perfect metaphor.

"wedged in the seam between / Heaven and Earth" is also lovely.

And I applaud any poet who can effectively work "Transverberation" into a poem.

David Lehman's avatar

A highly quality erotic poem .

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